Kia ora! I am a Year 7 student in Room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Kia ora Tait, I really enjoyed reading your holiday recount about your fishing trip and the way you used the five senses in your writing. Maybe next time you could work on spelling and checking your work fits on the page. Blog ya later! Ms Peters.
Kia ora Tait,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your holiday recount about your fishing trip and the way you used the five senses in your writing. Maybe next time you could work on spelling and checking your work fits on the page. Blog ya later! Ms Peters.