Kia ora! I am a Year 7 student in Room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Hi Tait your blog really sounded Interesting I liked that you talked about The cheese toasty Maybe next time you could make It longer if you were allowed.
Kia ora Tait, my name is Azure I am a year six student at Paihia School. I really like your blog about “Captivating recount” because you are telling everyone the little details about when you went fishing. I also like it because my papa owns a boat and we always go out fishing. Did you catch any fish when you went out on the boat???
Hello Tait my name is Zane and I am a year 8 student at Paihia School. I really liked your blog post about your captivating recount because it was very descriptive and it made me want to read more. This also reminded me of the time I wrote a recount. Did you think of adding anything else?
Kia ora Tait my name is Wairua a year 8 at Paihia school. I really liked you post about the captivating recount because you have said what your learning about and because you have told me that you are going to add more on to what you did in the holiday. I really liked it because my class haven’t done a captivating recount before. Do you like fishing?
Hi Tait your blog really sounded Interesting I liked that you talked about
ReplyDeleteThe cheese toasty Maybe next time you could make It longer if you were allowed.
Hi Ahi thanks for giving me the feed ford blog you latter
DeleteHello Tait, Ken here. I liked your captivating recount. It was very descriptive Maybe next time you should work on your spelling. Blog ya later KEN
ReplyDeleteKia ora Tait, my name is Azure I am a year six student at Paihia School. I really like your blog about “Captivating recount” because you are telling everyone the little details about when you went fishing. I also like it because my papa owns a boat and we always go out fishing.
ReplyDeleteDid you catch any fish when you went out on the boat???
Hello Tait my name is Zane and I am a year 8 student at Paihia School. I really liked your blog post about your captivating recount because it was very descriptive and it made me want to read more. This also reminded me of the time I wrote a recount. Did you think of adding anything else?
ReplyDeleteHi Tait I'm Michael from Room 5. This recount is very descriptive and is interesting. Maybe next time you could add some more words. Blog ya later!
ReplyDeleteHi Tait I like how you talked about your story but next time can you put more words. Blog ya later, Pounamu.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Tait my name is Wairua a year 8 at Paihia school. I really liked you post about the captivating recount because you have said what your learning about and because you have told me that you are going to add more on to what you did in the holiday. I really liked it because my class haven’t done a captivating recount before. Do you like fishing?
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